This is my first draft of my music video, there are lots of blank spaces due to footage that I haven't yet shot. I'm not entirely happy with this draft and have lots of changes that I wish to make for my second draft. The first change I'm going to change is having a wider range of shots as so far I have only used close up and medium long shots. I am going to start filming again on Tuesday with Sadie and I'm hoping to get some extreme close ups and long shots as well as a change of outfit as this is a convention of music videos.