I have added in some new footage and put more kaleidoscope scenes in.
Repetition of Kaleidoscopes gives the video more of a theme throughout and links each scene to the next therefore it doesn't just look like a montage of abstract scenarios.
I decided to add in some more close ups of Sadie (the artist) due to there being too many medium long shots making the video predictable.
Errors in the third draft...
I accidentally forgot to line up the bottom mirror image correctly and didn't realise until after I had published it onto YouTube. I have now corrected the error by lining them up correctly.
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